Welcome to my Cold Outreach Copywriting Playbook.
What follows has been field-tested across 30+ industries for 100+ clients.
- Why 99% of Cold outreach fails
- The truth behind the cold email Myth
- The most important acquisition rules
- The anatomy of a cold email that converts
- Why you should never stop at the first message
- How to make your campaigns 10x more efficient
Let’s dive in!
Every day, billions of cold emails are sent to decision-makers worldwide.
Yet, less than 1% actually get to a real discussion.
And 1% of those get a signed deal.
- They try to sell rather than helping
- They pitch a good solution to the wrong audience
- They pitch a solution to an audience without the problem
- They sound like all the others
- They do not provide a clear path to the best next action
In this playbook, I will teach you how to avoid falling in those pitfalls, and the techniques to craft your best performing cold outreach. Before diving deeper, we need to align on one key point: the role of cold email.
Let's start by debunking a myth.
Cold email is not made to sell.
It's a tool to get your from stranger to booked meeting. Period.
The goal is to sign new clients. And cold email is a means to get there.
To turn your ideal client persona into a lead.
The higher the price tag, the truer this becomes.
Selling is a multi-step process. Each step matters.
And let me tell you: Selling is all about seduction.
🦸♂ You’re not the hero. Your prospect is. Don’t sell a product or service. Sell what your customer can become, do, or achieve thanks to it. Your customer is not paying for a product or a service. Your customer will pay for a transformation from situation A (not optimal) to situation B (the desired outcome).
A great salesperson never presents himself or herself as a superhero; they are the one who enables the customer to become one. To go from A to B easily. You are the guide on your prospect's quest (the Sam to the Frodo - for The Lord of the Rings fans). Your prospect (and only your prospect) is the real hero of the story.
It’s a reflection of how we tend to see our own creations:
Unfortunately, this is also the worst way to send a cold email.
A potential customer never wakes up in the morning thinking “I hope a marketer or salesperson will send me an email to present their product”.
- A sales director doesn't want a CRM, they want a high-performing team and deals that come in.
- A marketing director doesn't want an analytics tool, they want to prove their ROI and get their next budget.
- A CEO doesn't want a service, they want to save time, sleep better, or grow faster.
In order for you to show you can help them, the first step will be to:
A hot lead is someone who is already interested in your solution and asking for it.
To transform a cold lead into a warm lead, the #1 focus should be to make it absolutely clear that your solution is a perfect fit for their problem.
Since they don’t know you yet (don’t forget it’s the first time they are reading from you), the only way to judge your solution will be your understanding of their situation.
Focus on the problem first. Always.
Focus on validating the problem. Don’t pitch the solution.
Chances are, you’d be much more willing to take that second medicine.
To summarize,
Following this structure will already bring you in the top 10% of cold email senders.
❌ Before: ”Hi {{firstName}}, I want to introduce to our {{SuperSolution}} which can do:
- This
- And that
- And also this
✅ After:
Let’s now dig into the anatomy of a cold email to bring you from top 10% to the top 1%.
To convert with your copywriting, you'll need to keep these 4 goals in mind:
- Spark curiosity to get them to open the email (that’s the subject line)
- Capture their attention from the very first lines (that’s your introduction)
- Maintain engagement throughout the body of the email (that’s how you link problem and solution)
- Inspire to take action and respond (that’s your call to action)
To achieve this, the structure of your email will be essential. Every word and every sentence must directly contribute to these goals. Anything superfluous should be removed.
📐 To achieve this, here is my formula for an optimal cold email structure: - Email subject line - Introduction - Situation / Problem - Value / Solution - Social proof - CTA / CTC
1 - The email subject line 💬
The best approach here is to identify the underlying value of your offer and present it briefly.
Example: if you are selling “Cold email services to sales managers” and you are at the end of Q3, you might use a subject line such as “acquisition target {{company}} Q4”
The idea is to keep it short, to the point, personalized for the person you are sending it to.
To help you achieve yours, here is my personal subject line checklist:
✅ Subject Line checklist: [ ] Sparks curiosity - the purpose of the subject line in your email is to encourage people to read more. [ ] Keep it short: 3-6 words max, ensures readability even on mobile. [ ] Make it clear - easy to understand, concrete. No guesswork. [ ] Use only lowercase - to mimic internal company communication. [ ] Relate it to the content - it must be a trailer, not a clickbait. [ ] Personalize it - show that you address this person and no one else. [ ] Avoid triggering spam filters: no capital letters, punctuation, or exaggerated wording (example: "FREE," "URGENT !!," "ACT NOW", "make money," and "limited time offer” ) [ ] A/B test your subject lines - to find the best performing ones
A few examples to re-use:
📧 {{Subject}} optimisation
📧 {{Goal}} achieved
📧 {{Topic}} results
📧 {{Industry}} strategy
📧 {{Department}} target
📧 {{Product}} milestone
It should explain why the reader should continue reading, even though at this point you are still a stranger.
Think of it as the first line you would say to this person if you met in real life.
Tips & Tricks
👉 Make it about them, not you.
A few examples to re-use:
🤝 Hello {{firstName}}, While reading about your recent developments in {{Press}}, I discovered that you are currently {{NewDevelopment}}
🤝 Hi {{FirstName}} Excited to see {{companyName}} at {{Event}}! We will also be there with the {{Yourcompany}} team. Let’s meet up!
🤝 Hi {{FirstName}} Congratulations on your new adventure at {{companyName}}!
🤝 Hi {{FirstName}} I came across several of your job postings, have you found out the perfect {{JobProfile}} yet ?
3 - The Situation / Problem
The focus here should be on connecting with the person by showing that you understand what they are going through, whether it’s their current objectives, challenges, difficulties or dreams.
The key to identifying problems is a precise targeting.
This can only be achieved when your targets are precise enough that they think the same way, because they face the same kind of challenges.
- If you target marketers, they want to have great marketing results.
- if you target marketers in B2B SAAS companies, they will want to improve their acquisition funnel to reduce CAC (cost of client acquisition) and increase LTV (lifetime-value).
- if you target the new head of marketing at B2B SAAS companies who started the job within the last six months, you know they will want to challenge previous strategies and develop their own acquisition strategy to reduce CAC and increase LTV.
The more precise your targeting, the better your problem identification will be. That’s why a great copywriting won’t do the trick alone.
The key, is to send:
The right message, to the right person, at the right time.
The right message is empathic, focused on the reader, bringing a solution or proposing a better alternative to a current situation faced.
The right person is the person best suited to understand your message. It is the person facing the problem, that has a high likelihood of looking for a solution. Ideally, this person should also be the decision maker.
The right time is the moment when the problem is PURE (Painful, Urgent, Recognized, Expensive)
Example: If you are proposing recruitment services or tools, the best time would be when a company has been trying to recruit a key profile for 3 to 6 months without any luck. Identifying companies that posted job offers more than 3 months ago for key roles, that are still active, would be a great place to start. There, the problem is PURE. Your solution will have more value in their eyes.
Once you showed that your message was specifically addressed to them, it’s time to present how you can help.
4 - Your Value Proposition
Your value proposition is not your offer. Your value proposition is the WHY someone should buy from you. Your offer is WHAT they buy from you.
The Golden Circle “by Simon Sinek” WHY = purpose, belief, mission (why you exist). HOW = the way you do things differently (your process). WHAT = the product/service you sell. 👉 Most companies communicate outside-in (WHAT → HOW → WHY). But the most inspiring ones go inside-out: they start with WHY.
How it helps to craft your value proposition: - If you start with WHAT, you sound like everyone else (“We do videos / we do social media content”). - If you start with WHY, you connect emotionally and stand out (“We exist to help B2B companies grow smarter by leveraging social media presence”). - Then you show HOW you deliver that promise (your unique methods), and finally WHAT you actually offer (your services). So your value proposition becomes more powerful because it’s not just a description of your offer, it’s rooted in a way that resonates with your potential clients.
Your offer is what you sell (a product, service, course, …), but it is the outcome that you will bring through your value proposition that clients purchase.
Of course, the promise (the dream outcome) does not define your value alone.
Three other aspects take part in the perception of your value:
The value Equation
The value equation by Alex Hormozi, breaks down what makes a product or service valuable in 4 components: 1. Dream outcome: How will this improve my life 2. Perceived likelihood of achievement: How likely is this to happen? 3. Time delay: How long will this take? 4. Effort & sacrifice: How much work will this take?
If you’re having trouble crafting a concise value proposition, you can use the Steve Blank formula to distill it down:
At {{Company}}, we help X, do Y, by doing Z. Example: At Leadix, we help B2B companies fill their acquisition pipeline by introducing them to their next best clients.
Keep in mind that your proposal, as presented in your email, is not the entire meal.
5 - Social Proof
6 - Call to Action (CTA)
Rules of thumb:
- One ask only.
- Answered by YES or NO.
- No links unless requested (reduces friction and spam risk).
- Offer an out (“If not relevant, I’ll close my loop.”) → builds trust.
CTC is the New CTA
After:
👉 A good CTC doesn’t push the meeting directly on a first contact.
A lack of reply can also be that:
- Your email got lost in the crowd,
- Your email was received at the wrong time of day,
- Your email was read quickly,
- Your reader got interrupted by a disruptive element,
- Sometimes even, your email landed in SPAM (although Lemwarm will help you prevent that).
This is a client’s Lemlist campaign results - step by step:
In this particular case, we contacted 350 people with a highly targeted offer. While the first message got us 6 positive replies, the rest of the sequence enabled us to generate 14 more leads. That’s a 233% increase in results, just by adding 3 follow-ups.
“Hey, have you seen my last email ?” - Nobody wants to reply to that.
The best way to craft qualitative follow-ups is to be sure to add value in every email you send.
While your first email will be an introduction and a “trailer” to your value offer, the follow-ups should be key elements of your USP (unique selling proposition) that you put forward.
Each follow-up email should add value to your exchange. And if you have no value left to give, then your sequence stops.
To do so, you can follow my Diamond Rule:
💎 The Follow-ups Diamond Rule
Your value offer - aka Unique Selling Proposition, can be seen as a diamond. Each facet represents a part of your value. Depending on the client in front of you, you will showcase different facets.
Those facets are the key value points that make you unique, and could convince prospects you are the right solution for their needs. Each of your follow-ups should detail one of those value points based on their importance for your target.
[Exercise] - craft your follow-up structure based on the diamond rule
Take a sheet of paper, write your company name in the center, then add around (in a mind-map format) all the value elements of your Unique Selling Proposition.
Example: A sales tool specialized in pricing for Sales Leaders could have 3 Key values such as “Reducing sales inefficiency”, “Improving closing rate” and “Making it enjoyable”. They will then have a first follow-up presenting how the tool can help reduce sales inefficiency. Then a second one about how it also improves closing rates. And the last one will be about how enjoyable the entire sales process becomes. Et voilà.
With all that in mind. You’re now ready to craft your perfect sequence.
Trigger-based outbound 🧲
A trigger can be at the company level:
- a company that was mentioned in the press,
- a company that closed a fundraising round,
- a company hiring for a specific job,
- a company hitting a milestone,
- …
Or at the person level:
- a recent new job in the company,
- a recent promotion in the company,
- participation in an event,
- content published,
- …
The number of people you can reach through a trigger based approach will be limited. But the efficiency of reaching out at the right time will make up for it.
[Exercise] - Build your own trigger list
Start by writing down your ideal client problem(s). Then map all key moments in the life of a company or career of a person where this arises.
For each moment, identify the publicly available information that best signals it.
Once your list is complete, score each item from 1 to 5, with 1 being the least probable and 5 being the most probable. Then, score them again from 1 to 5, this time from least to highest volume of leads. Finally, order your list by score.
The higher the score, the better the triggers.
Example: if you sell marketing tools or services to B2B companies, your triggers could look like: “hiring a marketer”, “New head of marketing in the company”, “Rebranding”, “New presence on a social platform”, “Fundraising”, “New technology used”, …
Don’t stop at emails - Go multichannel
When writing a cold emails, you are limiting yourself to one channel of communication.
Example of a simple multichannel approach in Lemlist
Here is an example of a multichannel outreach sequence to book meetings before a physical event.
Chances are that you will give a logic answer: I needed it, it was a smart investment,…
But then why this brand and not the other one ? Tougher to explain with logic.
🤔 The Decision Hill - The ELMR Framework
The buying decision-making process always follows the same order: 1. Emotions 2. Logic 3. Motivation 4. Reward
It starts with emotion (the initial spark that grabs attention), then gets justified with logic (facts, features, ROI), fueled by motivation (urgency, trust, scarcity), and finally reinforced by the reward (the satisfaction of making the right choice).
In outbound marketing, this means you can’t lead with logic alone. If your message doesn’t first trigger an emotion — curiosity, relief, ambition — it will be ignored.
👉 A touch of humor can go a long way. If your message makes them smile, you’ve already won. Reply rates will spike.
As important as targeting is, your message also needs to feel authentic.
Don’t fall for templates - build your own
You may wonder why this playbook is not filled with winning Copy-Paste cold email templates.
Tips & tricks
👉 read your email out loud. If it sounds strange when you say it, it’s not done yet. Write it the way you would say it.
🎉 Congratulations!
Bonus: Your [copy-paste] starter cold email framework
I wish you a happy and efficient prospecting.
Good luck!
Morgann