Subject: Fully Remote Role at Stambaugh Ness
Hey <fancy>{{firstName}}<fancy>, things still going well at <fancy>{{companyName}}<fancy>? Hope you're as safe and healthy as can be - crazy 2020 so far.
TLDR - we are looking for a forward-thinking accounting mind to join us fully remote as an Experienced Accountant. This person would join either our growing AEC (Architecture, Engineer, Construction) division, or our Manufacturing & Distribution division.
I would love to have a chat considering your work with AEC related industries.
We have a strong focus on empowering our people to spend their careers playing to their greatest strengths, while providing them flexibility and growth. Our environment is very warm and graciousness-centric - our CEO walks around just in a casual t-shirt!
Also, check out our Glassdoor Reviews - 4.2 stars!
Is this something you would be interested in having a quick chat about?
Thanks,
Subject: Fully Remote Role at Stambaugh Ness
Hey <fancy>Mike<fancy>, things still going well at <fancy>Facebook<fancy>? Hope you're as safe and healthy as can be - crazy 2020 so far.
TLDR - we are looking for a forward-thinking accounting mind to join us fully remote as an Experienced Accountant. This person would join either our growing AEC (Architecture, Engineer, Construction) division, or our Manufacturing & Distribution division.
I would love to have a chat considering your work with AEC related industries.
We have a strong focus on empowering our people to spend their careers playing to their greatest strengths, while providing them flexibility and growth. Our environment is very warm and graciousness-centric - our CEO walks around just in a casual t-shirt!
Also, check out our Glassdoor Reviews - 4.2 stars!
Is this something you would be interested in having a quick chat about?
Thanks,
Julia "Wonder Woman" Adler, Senior Sourcer at Wayne Technologies, reached out to potential accountants to see if they'd be interested in a new job opportunity.
Subject: Fully Remote Role at Stambaugh Ness
VARIANT A
I'm going to just leave this right here...
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Joking aside, I'm following up on my email a couple of days ago re: the Experienced Accountant role.
We've stood the test of time for over 100 years and haven't stopped embracing new technology.
Let me know if this is in-line with your career projections - or at least if you got a chuckle out of the meme. And yes, I went that customized to make sure you knew this was just for you.
Thanks!
VARIANT B
<fancy>{{firstName}}<fancy> - I'm just making sure you haven't been captured by a couple of nefarious looking Australian Shepherds...
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Just kidding (those are my dogs though)! Are things going really well at <fancy>{{companyName}}<fancy> or is this not the direction you want to take your career?
Either is fine, just want to make sure we are/aren't in touch for the right reasons in the future.
Thanks!
Subject: Fully Remote Role at Stambaugh Ness
βVARIANT A
I'm going to just leave this right here...
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Joking aside, I'm following up on my email a couple of days ago re: the Experienced Accountant role.
We've stood the test of time for over 100 years and haven't stopped embracing new technology.
Let me know if this is in-line with your career projections - or at least if you got a chuckle out of the meme. And yes, I went that customized to make sure you knew this was just for you.
Thanks!
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VARIANT B
<fancy>Mike<fancy> - I'm just making sure you haven't been captured by a couple of nefarious looking Australian Shepherds...
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Just kidding (those are my dogs though)! Are things going really well at <fancy>Facebook<fancy> or is this not the direction you want to take your career?
Either is fine, just want to make sure we are/aren't in touch for the right reasons in the future.
Thanks!
Subject: Fully Remote Role at Stambaugh Ness
Hey <fancy>{{firstName}}<fancy>, things still going well at <fancy>{{companyName}}<fancy>? Hope you're as safe and healthy as can be - crazy 2020 so far.
TLDR - we are looking for a forward-thinking accounting mind to join us fully remote as an Experienced Accountant. This person would join either our growing AEC (Architecture, Engineer, Construction) division, or our Manufacturing & Distribution division.
I would love to have a chat considering your work with AEC related industries.
We have a strong focus on empowering our people to spend their careers playing to their greatest strengths, while providing them flexibility and growth. Our environment is very warm and graciousness-centric - our CEO walks around just in a casual t-shirt!
Also, check out our Glassdoor Reviews - 4.2 stars!
Is this something you would be interested in having a quick chat about?
Thanks,
Subject: Fully Remote Role at Stambaugh Ness
Hey <fancy>Mike<fancy>, things still going well at <fancy>Facebook<fancy>? Hope you're as safe and healthy as can be - crazy 2020 so far.
TLDR - we are looking for a forward-thinking accounting mind to join us fully remote as an Experienced Accountant. This person would join either our growing AEC (Architecture, Engineer, Construction) division, or our Manufacturing & Distribution division.
I would love to have a chat considering your work with AEC related industries.
We have a strong focus on empowering our people to spend their careers playing to their greatest strengths, while providing them flexibility and growth. Our environment is very warm and graciousness-centric - our CEO walks around just in a casual t-shirt!
Also, check out our Glassdoor Reviews - 4.2 stars!
Is this something you would be interested in having a quick chat about?
Thanks,
Julia "Wonder Woman" Adler, Senior Sourcer at Wayne Technologies, reached out to potential accountants to see if they'd be interested in a new job opportunity.
Subject: Fully Remote Role at Stambaugh Ness
VARIANT A
I'm going to just leave this right here...
β
β
Joking aside, I'm following up on my email a couple of days ago re: the Experienced Accountant role.
We've stood the test of time for over 100 years and haven't stopped embracing new technology.
Let me know if this is in-line with your career projections - or at least if you got a chuckle out of the meme. And yes, I went that customized to make sure you knew this was just for you.
Thanks!
VARIANT B
<fancy>{{firstName}}<fancy> - I'm just making sure you haven't been captured by a couple of nefarious looking Australian Shepherds...
β
β
Just kidding (those are my dogs though)! Are things going really well at <fancy>{{companyName}}<fancy> or is this not the direction you want to take your career?
Either is fine, just want to make sure we are/aren't in touch for the right reasons in the future.
Thanks!
Subject: Fully Remote Role at Stambaugh Ness
βVARIANT A
I'm going to just leave this right here...
β
β
Joking aside, I'm following up on my email a couple of days ago re: the Experienced Accountant role.
We've stood the test of time for over 100 years and haven't stopped embracing new technology.
Let me know if this is in-line with your career projections - or at least if you got a chuckle out of the meme. And yes, I went that customized to make sure you knew this was just for you.
Thanks!
β
VARIANT B
<fancy>Mike<fancy> - I'm just making sure you haven't been captured by a couple of nefarious looking Australian Shepherds...
β
β
Just kidding (those are my dogs though)! Are things going really well at <fancy>Facebook<fancy> or is this not the direction you want to take your career?
Either is fine, just want to make sure we are/aren't in touch for the right reasons in the future.
Thanks!
Subject: Fully Remote Role at Stambaugh Ness
Hey <fancy>{{firstName}}<fancy>, things still going well at <fancy>{{companyName}}<fancy>? Hope you're as safe and healthy as can be - crazy 2020 so far.
TLDR - we are looking for a forward-thinking accounting mind to join us fully remote as an Experienced Accountant. This person would join either our growing AEC (Architecture, Engineer, Construction) division, or our Manufacturing & Distribution division.
I would love to have a chat considering your work with AEC related industries.
We have a strong focus on empowering our people to spend their careers playing to their greatest strengths, while providing them flexibility and growth. Our environment is very warm and graciousness-centric - our CEO walks around just in a casual t-shirt!
Also, check out our Glassdoor Reviews - 4.2 stars!
Is this something you would be interested in having a quick chat about?
Thanks,
Subject: Fully Remote Role at Stambaugh Ness
Hey <fancy>Mike<fancy>, things still going well at <fancy>Facebook<fancy>? Hope you're as safe and healthy as can be - crazy 2020 so far.
TLDR - we are looking for a forward-thinking accounting mind to join us fully remote as an Experienced Accountant. This person would join either our growing AEC (Architecture, Engineer, Construction) division, or our Manufacturing & Distribution division.
I would love to have a chat considering your work with AEC related industries.
We have a strong focus on empowering our people to spend their careers playing to their greatest strengths, while providing them flexibility and growth. Our environment is very warm and graciousness-centric - our CEO walks around just in a casual t-shirt!
Also, check out our Glassdoor Reviews - 4.2 stars!
Is this something you would be interested in having a quick chat about?
Thanks,
Julia "Wonder Woman" Adler, Senior Sourcer at Wayne Technologies, reached out to potential accountants to see if they'd be interested in a new job opportunity.
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We love a good cold email teardown. In other words, analyzing why a specific cold email template worked and breaking it down to the smallest details so that both a beginner and an advanced player can extract value from it.
Without further ado, let's get rolling.
While talking to Julia and her team, we realized she vetted each of the 221 people she contacted. In other words, she qualified each candidate using her own indicators to determine who would be the people most likely to be interested in such an opportunity.
How can somebody qualify leads before ever talking to them?
You have to identify a "common pattern", based on your research and experience, that would allow you to segment prospects who are most likely to respond. For example, if you're looking to hire somebody, you can look for things like "current job/availability", "relevant work experience", "company's track record so far", and candidate's content on social media. Assign ranking criteria to each and assess who qualifies most.
Quality research leads to quality results, and Julia's campaign is no exception.
When hiring, selling, or whatever your objective ultimately is, it's vastly important for us to be speaking the way we and our brand speaks. Julia isn't a robot, nor is her company. With that in mind, she opted for a very friendly and fun style of writing to bring her brand closer to candidates. Using sentences like "our CEO walks around just in a casual t-shirt!" or the photo of her dogs makes her cold email sound warm and human. And, at a same time, it differentiates Julia from the rest of the sourcers.
What can we learn from Julia's cold email sequence?
Julia "Wonder Woman" Adler, Senior Sourcer at Wayne Technologies, reached out to potential accountants to see if they'd be interested in a new job opportunity.