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Sales pitch email example

380
Emails sent
81%
Open rate
37%
Reply rate
1

Step one email

Subject line: <fancy>{{companyName}}<fancy>, the king of <fancy>{{City}}<fancy>

Hi <fancy>{{firstName}}<fancy>,

<fancy>{{Tiramisu}}<fancy> :)

I’ve googled recently “<fancy>{{Search}}<fancy>” and noticed your competitors ranking higher than <fancy>{{companyName}}<fancy>.

I want to be the person who will help you take over the throne, while also ramping up your sales.

Here’s a quick plan overview (link) I suggest so you know I mean business.

I’d love to hop on a call with you and talk about everything in more detail.

Let me know if you're interested.

Have a good one,

<fancy>{{signature}}<fancy>

Subject line: <fancy>Caffeine Atlanta<fancy>, the king of <fancy>Atlanta<fancy>

Hi <fancy>Sarah<fancy>,

<fancy>I'm a caffeine addict, sipping my second double espresso today and it's only 11 am.<fancy>

I’ve googled recently “<fancy>best coffee shops in Atlanta<fancy>” and noticed your competitors ranking higher than <fancy>Caffeine Atlanta<fancy>.



I want to be the person who will help you take over the throne, while also ramping up your sales.

Here’s a quick plan overview (link) I suggest so you know I mean business.

I’d love to hop on a call with you and talk about everything in more detail.

Let me know if you're interested.

Have a good one,

<fancy>Vuk<fancy>


380
emails sent 🤔
81%
open rate 🙂
37%
reply rate 😁
2

Step two email

3

Step three email

1

Step one email

Subject line: <fancy>{{companyName}}<fancy>, the king of <fancy>{{City}}<fancy>

Hi <fancy>{{firstName}}<fancy>,

<fancy>{{Tiramisu}}<fancy> :)

I’ve googled recently “<fancy>{{Search}}<fancy>” and noticed your competitors ranking higher than <fancy>{{companyName}}<fancy>.

I want to be the person who will help you take over the throne, while also ramping up your sales.

Here’s a quick plan overview (link) I suggest so you know I mean business.

I’d love to hop on a call with you and talk about everything in more detail.

Let me know if you're interested.

Have a good one,

<fancy>{{signature}}<fancy>

Subject line: <fancy>Caffeine Atlanta<fancy>, the king of <fancy>Atlanta<fancy>

Hi <fancy>Sarah<fancy>,

<fancy>I'm a caffeine addict, sipping my second double espresso today and it's only 11 am.<fancy>

I’ve googled recently “<fancy>best coffee shops in Atlanta<fancy>” and noticed your competitors ranking higher than <fancy>Caffeine Atlanta<fancy>.



I want to be the person who will help you take over the throne, while also ramping up your sales.

Here’s a quick plan overview (link) I suggest so you know I mean business.

I’d love to hop on a call with you and talk about everything in more detail.

Let me know if you're interested.

Have a good one,

<fancy>Vuk<fancy>


380
emails sent 🤔
81%
open rate 🙂
37%
reply rate 😁
2

Step two email

3

Step three email

Subject line: <fancy>{{companyName}}<fancy>, the king of <fancy>{{City}}<fancy>

Hi <fancy>{{firstName}}<fancy>,

<fancy>{{Tiramisu}}<fancy> :)

I’ve googled recently “<fancy>{{Search}}<fancy>” and noticed your competitors ranking higher than <fancy>{{companyName}}<fancy>.

I want to be the person who will help you take over the throne, while also ramping up your sales.

Here’s a quick plan overview (link) I suggest so you know I mean business.

I’d love to hop on a call with you and talk about everything in more detail.

Let me know if you're interested.

Have a good one,

<fancy>{{signature}}<fancy>

Subject line: <fancy>Caffeine Atlanta<fancy>, the king of <fancy>Atlanta<fancy>

Hi <fancy>Sarah<fancy>,

<fancy>I'm a caffeine addict, sipping my second double espresso today and it's only 11 am.<fancy>

I’ve googled recently “<fancy>best coffee shops in Atlanta<fancy>” and noticed your competitors ranking higher than <fancy>Caffeine Atlanta<fancy>.



I want to be the person who will help you take over the throne, while also ramping up your sales.

Here’s a quick plan overview (link) I suggest so you know I mean business.

I’d love to hop on a call with you and talk about everything in more detail.

Let me know if you're interested.

Have a good one,

<fancy>Vuk<fancy>


380
emails sent 🤔
81%
open rate 🙂
37%
reply rate 😁
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Why did this outreach campaign work?

We love a good cold email teardown. In other words, analyzing why a specific cold email template worked and breaking it down to the smallest details so that both a beginner and an advanced player can extract value from it.

This exact template is an example of how you can reach out to hotels and offer to boost their online booking rate. The best thing is that this cold email template can easily be adjusted to any type of the service. 

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Show them the promised land

There’s not a single entrepreneur who wouldn’t want to beat his/her competitors. This is why your personalized image is playing on the current state of play for your prospect, capturing their attention and awakening their almost certain desire to compete. 

Also, this shows them that you did research and thus you know what you are talking about.

Tease your prospects

Saying you’re going to do something and showing how you’ll make that happen are two different things. That’s why we feel adding that link in the email which will act as a short teaser can do wonders for your campaign and demonstrate you’re the real deal.

It’s never a good idea to overwhelm people with multiple options or to overcomplicate your closing sentence. A simple yes or no question after a good cold email is more than enough to boost your reply rate. Once they reply, there are plenty of ways in which you can book that meeting.


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